James- the magazine is taking more shape now but a few things for consideration: the double spread is missing a few codes and conventions such as the name of the magazine, page numbers etc and the image on the right is hard to see and a long distance. The Titans needs to be capital letters- no excuse for typos! There is blank space that needs thought under the pull quote.
Layout of the contents is still a little basic and could be sectioned and laid out more professionally.
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